In nowadays, I think the saying: the camera never lies is probably not true. Because the technology in the world is too advanced that almost everyone could be mistook for another person easily. And the other reason is that the photo just shows a moment that you actually don’t know what happened or what will happen. Such as a girl in the photo looks very angry, but she didn’t really feel angry. She just wanted to give us an impression that she was angry at that time. And the final reason is that the girl in nowadays almost knows how to make up, and it will be a lot of different to a girl. For example, the famous website wretch has many photos of different kinds of girls, but some of them really look like another person when they take off the make up. According to all of the above, I think we can just look the photos to have some fun because too many of the photos will lie.
Hi Robert,
回覆刪除你提的點都不錯，但是如果可以更有組織的呈現會更好!Also, I like your first example.
此外，一些語法要請你修正一下:
1. In nowadays, 這個Nowadays幾乎都用副詞呈現，所以請把in刪掉
2. I think the saying: the camera never lies is probably not true. 因為你文法架構的需要，所以分號在這裏不適用，在the camera never lies的前後用--才對。
3. Because the technology in the world is too advanced that almost everyone could be mistook for another person easily.
第一，too...that...還是so...that...
第二，be mistook還是be mistaken
4. And the other reason is that the photo just shows a moment that you actually don’t know what happened or what will happen. 文法沒錯，而意思上...很深奧...
5. Such as a girl in the photo looks very angry, but she didn’t really feel angry.
第一，這裏不能用such as, 請用別的舉例的片語
第二，but she didn't really feel angry後面加上when the photo was taken才更完整
6. And the final reason is that the girl in nowadays almost knows how to make up, and it will be a lot of different to a girl.
第一、這裡的almost位置不對，請更改，if you don't know how to, ask me.
第二、in nowadays的問題如上
7. For example, the famous website wretch has many photos of different kinds of girls, but some of them really look like another person when they take off the make up. 我明白你想說化妝使得女生變漂亮、變得不一樣，而我們根本不知道照片上的女孩的真面目...但是你沒有把"我們根本不知道照片上的女孩的真面目"的英文寫出來，你必須寫出來才行，即便只是短短的一句也OK
8. According to all of the above, I think we can just look the photos to have some fun because too many of the photos will lie.
這一句一樣有一句話沒有寫出來。